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Old 19th June 2010
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Keren .. baru diputusin ya ndan ?
Lanjutkan ndan pernyataan puisi ke season berikutnya
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wah makin banyak n manteb ni puisinya
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melon-nya mana nie dah 3minggu ane gak dikasih melon



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melon-nya mana nie dah 3minggu ane gak dikasih melon



udah tu
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Default karya puisi 22
perih hati nie saat dirimu dustai diriku...
perih hati nie saat dirimu melukai hatiku...
perih hati nie saat dirimu selalu menyakitin diriku...
perih hati nie saat dirimu mengkhianati diriku...

apakah dirimu sadar dengan semua apa yang telah diriku berikan...
apakah dirimu sadar dengan semua kepalsuan yang ada didalam hatimu..
apakah dirimu sadar dengan semua kemunafikan dirimu...
biarlah diriku sendiri yang akan menahan semua cobaan nie walau dirimu telah meninggalkan diriku...



maaf jika puisi saya kurang bagus...semoga anda senang dengan karya2 saya..


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Nice Poem Ndan...

Makin hari makin OK saja Koleksinya...
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aduh...... kok mirip sama keadaan ku ndan?????:rengek::courage:
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miris kalo dihayatin ndan,,
ane prnah ngalamin soalnya
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w cuma jago buat puisi tapi kalo yang lain masih banyak belajar dari para momod maupun senior ceriwis
tetapi sayang gak ada lomba buat puisi kalopun ada w ikut


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terus berkarya ndan, manteb dah
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