Before & After

[Fotografer]

So...I did a shoot for a local bunch of Mary Kay consultants last weekend and this is one of the more dramatic "changes" from the more than 15 women I shot that day.

 

I'd like some feedback on the processing of the (obvious) after shot, if it's too much, if it's "unreal".

 

I'd also like some feedback on the before shot. I was specifically asked to "not do anything fancy to make them look better" so as to showcase the makeup. I don't think I could have gotten the shot any more ... for lack of a better term "ugly". Bad lighting, bad composition...I broke all the rules. Is it too much of a contrast for a Before & After shot like this? Did I make her look too ugly?

 

 

Thanks for looking and for your comments, in advance.

 

-Jason

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