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Old 9th July 2010
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Sebelum ku mengenalmu
Hidup ini bagaikan malam sepi tiada berbintang
Yang hanya ditemani temaram sinar rembulan
Di sudut kegelapan

tapi saat kau ada
Deritaku pergi bahagia kumiliki
Kini hanya 1 yang ingin kuucap
Aku sangat menyayangimu...

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Sebelum ku mengenalmu
Hidup ini bagaikan malam sepi tiada berbintang
Yang hanya ditemani temaram sinar rembulan
Di sudut kegelapan

tapi saat kau ada
Deritaku pergi bahagia kumiliki
Kini hanya 1 yang ingin kuucap
Aku sangat menyayangimu...
nice bro
semoga orang tersebut bisa menjadi lilin lentera hatimu
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wah mahakarya ni
nice ndan
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Sebelum ku mengenalmu
Hidup ini bagaikan malam sepi tiada berbintang
Yang hanya ditemani temaram sinar rembulan
Di sudut kegelapan

tapi saat kau ada
Deritaku pergi bahagia kumiliki
Kini hanya 1 yang ingin kuucap
Aku sangat menyayangimu...


wah sudah banyak nie pengganti w
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Old 13th July 2010
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wah sudah banyak nie pengganti w
pengganti apa'a ndan?
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bikin terharu
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meski singkat..
tpi makna'a dalem ndan...
nice...
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Ikutan nyimak ndan
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silahkan ndan,makasih y uda mampir kesini.

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meski singkat..
tpi makna'a dalem ndan...
nice...
emang itu tujuannya ndan,cz cewek ane suka protes kalau puisi ane kepanjangan.jadi dibikin pendek aja.
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bikin terharu
masa sih ndan?
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ini puisi curhat nih,... genre baru,..... hehehe
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